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DLC 17 Bugs

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Typoes:

Random Event Theatre 1:

screech, demands

should be

screech demands

 

Letter From Blake Anderston, College Vernin

I guess its customary to write

should be

I guess it’s customary to write

 

Letter From Alison Jamey, College Durand

I was in your place, so was everyone

should be

I was in your place, and so was everyone

 

Letter Found Taped In A Previously Empty Locker

for only then, will you find success

should be

for only then will you find success

 

Random Event Student – Amada 2

the flowers who’s fragrance she’s currently selling

should be

the flowers whose fragrance she’s currently selling

 

Metallists’ Credo, by Nels Allin IV:

refining metals from its natural state

should be

refining metal from its natural state

 

From Onyx to Cerulean, by Cole Peldrin I

In accordance to Danothen’s kin

should be

According to Danothen’s kin

 

From Onyx to Cerulean, by Cole Peldrin II

The Danothen line were the men that…changing of the world had came

should be

The Danothen line was the men who…changing of the world had come

 

From Onyx to Cerulean, by Cole Peldrin III

It was through their knowledge of metalcrafting that enabled worldly ships to be built

should be

It was their knowledge of metalcrafting that enabled worldly ships to be built

 

From Onyx to Cerulean, by Cole Peldrin IV

dampen metallic tunnels

should be

damp metallic tunnels

 

From Onyx to Cerulean, by Cole Peldrin V

among the humans that once dwelled.

should be

among the humans who once dwelled within the tunnels.

 

Weaponsmith RL I:

pile discarded objects

should be

pile of discarded objects

 

Weaponsmith RL III:

Teaching weaponsmithing as a means to learning grammar?...We try to teach pacifism here, need we bring weaponry to the students.

should be

Teaching weaponsmithing as a means to teaching grammar?...We try to teach pacifism here. Need we bring weaponry to the students?

 

Weaponsmith RL V:

true blacksmith’s who

should be

true blacksmiths who

 

Weaponsmith RL VI:

weeks ,

should be

weeks,

 

Weaponsmith RL VII:

thirty seventh…spit

should be

thirty-seventh…spat

 

Meek (Ability)

Charisma

should be

Charm

 

Sharing the Secret

many Legates of Academagia over the years, some have been

should be

many Legates of Academagia over the years; some have been

 

Storm Dream 11

“I’m here to stop you!” You declare a boldly as you can.

“HAHAHAHAHA! Do you know who you’re dealing with?”

should be

“I’m here to stop you!” you declare as boldly as you can.

“HAHAHAHAHA! Do you know whom you’re dealing with?”

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I am running out of typoes to list, but here are a few:

A Hystorie of Palace Administration IV:

girl that he was acquainted with...She has told him...bells ability

should be

girl whom he was acquainted with...She had told him...bell's ability

 

Random Event Magic Trap 8: this event has many typoes related to spacing, but the only one that I have recorded is:

pie.Doing

should be

pie. Doing

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