In Emilia Strolin's adventure:
I don't know if it's just me but in "Plots and Planning" in the option "This has really gone far enough" the two paragraphs are a little weird.
"You explain to Her that, eventually, Emilia Strolin's going to have to grow up and accept that stupid inter-House politics are nothig more than childish games. That no matter how Her tries, Emilia Strolin house will never get "ahead," and that the rivalry between Durand and Aranaz has nothing but the potential for violence."
"You're just lucky Emilia Strolin couldn't turn you to stone with her eyes. "If you decide to stop being a coward and help me out, I'll be waiting," Emilia Strolin says bitterly."
(In the second paragraph The "her" is missing the "link" [i guess])