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In the adventure "A Bad Feeling" after using the Decypher Handwriting skill successfully, on page 3 it says, "You keep fiddling with the gears until you're sure that the contraption until you hear the group of students returning." It sounds to me like the writer changed their mind about what event causes "you" to stop fiddling.

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