Schwarzbart Posted September 13, 2013 Report Share Posted September 13, 2013 1) Add a charsheet to the book 2) If you use acronym like d12 you have to declear what this means bevore or when you use it the first time. 3) The infos about the extra materials needed to play the gamebook need to mentioned at the start of the book or on the backside in my opinion. 4) In the Holfast Rules "Boon" is mentioned in the skills without letting the player know what effect it haves 5) You have a Skills as numeric value and 5 skills to pick. Maybe its bether to use i.e. the word Ability or Talent for the 5 skill choices to avoid confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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