Typos and Such in Patch 7

[Legate of Mineta]

Danae;

 

Thanks! For the Merit- your score can go up and down and won't necessarily reflect everything that touches upon it. My first guess is that you may have had -2 Merit points due to a Random Event, but it also could be due to an Action taken by a Student which did not appear in the Report.

[danae]

thanks - yes, it's possible the decrease in merit came from a random event.

 

Event Performance 8

Option - give the money

You look atOlivia's face : missing space

 

Event Garden 2

Option - Negation spell, failure

deciding to attack the problem for a different angle

 

Story Shall We Dance? - Philippe Marchant Adventure part II

Option - Manipulation, success I think

You hope he can controll his anger

double L

 

Lore - Donner of the Arms

would begin to surface as a means__ strengthen spells

missing word - to

 

Action - Practice Math

Expand RDM Arithmetic Skill

instead of the usual

Expand Random

 

And two instances of phemes being repeated in a spell description. I am not sure whether it is intended or not (have not played long enough to know). If it's intented I apologize, please tell me so I don't report that in the future.

 

Spell - Wizard's Aid

Pheme section =

Magic

Magic

Time

Time

Intelligence

Insight

Magic

 

Spell - Beginner's Dispel

Pheme section =

Dispel

Dispel

[Legate of Mineta]

Danae;

 

As always, thank you!

 

The Pheme doubling is in fact correct, but it's only of interest to you in Duels, when you need to manually add Phemes to your Palette. Some Spells require more than one of the same Pheme, whether or different 'senses' of the Pheme or additional potency.

[danae]

Understood about the doubling of phemes. I'm not really playing yet, just trying out basic things.

 

Story - Quite elementary, my dear bruiser... (Philippe Marchant Adventure)

Patience option, failure

while he was running and errand

typo - an

 

Skill Description - Infiltration

those who study this Skill will fing

typo - find

 

Catalog description - Adventures in Astronomy

Most of the items found here tech students

typo - teach

 

Lore - Study Areas of the Geometric Art

something unseen that is far more important that financial assistance

typo - than

 

Since I'm having you take a look at that lore already - I was not sure about

Angles, polygons, areas and perimeter are but a few areas

Wondered if perimeter should have an s also... My English Skill is not high enough for me to successfully use a Typo Detection Spell on this sentence.

[Legate of Mineta]

Danae;

 

Thank you again, we will review these in DLC 2. Perimeter(s) does need the 's'.

[Raide]

Random event: Class is interrupted by a janitor

Immediately after a brief and whispered conversation, Shesays that the class has free time

 

Random event: strolling at night and encounter lit classroom

There shouldn't bee any lights on this late at night

 

Mentor: Duel Explanation

Without giving you a chance to accept or deny, Ingatius begins with, <- should be Ignatius

[Legate of Mineta]

Raide;

 

Thank you- we will try to close these in DLC 2.

 

For the next time that you come across a typo- if you don't mind pressing F12 and recording the title there, you'll be able to get the actual name of the Event to display in the bottom left hand corner. This name helps us to quickly find the source of the typo.

 

Thanks again!

[Jazerus]

In Random Event Student - Montague, the exit associated with the Running subskill is marked with "Run." rather than "Running."

[Legate of Mineta]

Jazerus;

 

Thank you, we'll look at this one for DLC 2.

[89157Z]

I'm not sure how to specify events - do they have a proper name somewhere that I'm not seeing? Anyways, I just found a typo in one. So, uh, I'm just going to make a wild guess about how to identify it.

 

Random Event - Glued Hands Together

Exit 1 says "Don't no anything, just try not to interact with anyone until you hands come apart."

 

EDIT: Got another one. Phillipe and Malthezar are fighting. I used the Character Study option and the result was a bit of a mess. In addition to huge errant spacings, the descriptions of the characters tried to print.

[Legate of Mineta]

89157Z;

 

You can find the proper name if you press F12- it will appear in the bottom left.

 

Thanks!

[Jazerus]

The Steamy Stride ability's description refers to itself as "Sultry Stride", and specifically says that it does not increase Flirting - while the effects of the ability say that it does (and it does).

 

Also, the emotion Cowardice says that it can be removed by expanding Schoolyard Education; I have been unable to remove it in this way. This is slightly more than a typo, but I was making this post anyway while testing Cowardice so I thought I should add it in as well.

[Legate of Mineta]

Jazerus;

 

Thanks- for Cowardice, it's an AND Prerequisite instead of an OR- that will be corrected in DLC 2.

[89157Z]

Lore typo

Gods: A Poem, lines 4 and 5.

"They needed up as we needed them.

When they called out for help with came to them"

 

Another one from the same research line.

Rebirth

"When Man was given the chance to propser and create his own world..."

[Legate of Mineta]

Thank you!

[Sabin Stargem]

Event Typo

Flying Teacup

 

"Quite a Doosey" should be "Quite a Doozy"

 

 

 

Adventure Type

Join the Old Tradition

 

"I'm saddenedbecause" (needs a space, located on page 3 of the Theory of Gates path.)

[Legate of Mineta]

Sabin;

 

Thank you, we will try to close these in DLC 2.

 

For the next time, if you press F12 when you see an issue you would like to report, it will show you the name of the Story. This can be very helpful for us to quickly find and correct the problem.

 

Thanks again!

[danae]

Event Disguise / Infiltration 3

You're dancing when you see a Professor Pachait arrive

 

Event Crafting 4

Pure Luck option, failure

the bushes rudely fling you opnto the path

typo - onto

 

Event Duel 1

main text

speeds up.A roar from the crowd

space missing

 

Lore - He, from the Grand Wizardly Army

and closed my eye

just one...?

 

Lore - Philosopher Mastorus on Mammals, from Creatures

"Creatures" is missing from the title when the lore is displayed in the right area, but title is ok in the report

 

Lore - Philosopher Mastorus on Amphibians, Creatures

There's a colon instead of a quotation mark at the beginning of the lore

: The frog

 

Lore - Zelda Irmes, Age 9, on Animals

I love aminals

Reading the rest of the lore I don't think the inversion of m and n is intentional (because of her age)

 

I found some Pheme descriptions in which the word Pheme is not capitalized and in some instances I' m pretty sure they should be. It might not be a priority and if they are not always written with a capital P then I would risk over-reporting because I'm not familiar with the rules of English on this. Let me know if you want them reported.

[Legate of Mineta]

Danae;

 

Thanks!

 

In regards to Phemes- we usually capitalize them to draw attention, but it's not really necessary.

 

For 'aminals', this is a common 'cute' misspelling for children. This is probably intended, but we'll review.

[danae]

Lore - The Calamities SP II

when tragdy befalls them

typo - tragedy

 

Lore - Journey's End

bringing me to me knees

typo - my

 

Event Health and Illness 2

Option - try not to scratch (1st one)

so much for feelingvivacious

space missing

[Fletchin]

I'm not sure if this is a typo or not but, the Insightful Eye cream from Ulland Illithan's Bare Necessities (Merchant) also seems to refer to itself as the Alert Eye cream. It also says it needs to be applied "correctly" to the eyelid, implying it needs to pass a successful Cosmetics roll but nothing is explicitly stated.

[Legate of Mineta]

Fletchin;

 

Thanks- that sounds like a minor revision to the Item Description would be in order.

 

Danae;

 

Thank you!

[Fletchin]

Sigalis Adventure - Follow Her Rules - A Plan

 

Observation Success (page 2)- Just wait until Sigalis sees rhis place!

 

Persuasion Success - You wonder what plays this old troup must have put on;

[Legate of Mineta]

Fletchin;

 

Thank you- these will be closed in DLC 2.

[Schwarzbart]

Because of my RPG Char I watched the first Spells he got a bit more closer and now wondering about the Material Shaping Spell

The Roll of this spell is int + Material Knowledge and Material Knowledge is a Enchant skill so why is it called a Revision and not a Enchant spell?

And because its the first "Revision" spell I aktuall got in this game so maybe this spell realy should also be rolled on a revision skill.